You sat in your pants all day in front of a computer isn't a story. Vegas, the shady investors, the size of the operation, the feud, the lifestyle, the effort and innovation...now that's a story.Derek27 wrote: ↑Tue May 08, 2018 2:57 pmIf I made a billion the story would be along the lines of: sat in front of my computer, placed a bet that won, placed another bet that won, etc. I wouldn't bother mentioning all the young girls I bring back to my flat (or by then, mansion) as it's not relevant to the story.
If you take all the non relevant stuff out of a story, it's just a headline.
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